What I’ve learned from Modernist writers.

What the modern masters taught me about freelance copywriting Melbourne
Or, how to Marie Kondo your writing style for greater clarity.

“Good writers are those that keep the language efficient. That is to say, keep it accurate, keep it clear.”

— Ezra Pound

As all the great Modernist writers knew, expressing ideas and emotions is best done using evocative but simple language.

Ezra Pound’s contribution to literature was immense, not least because he taught writers to keep it simple. Before Ezra, poems and novels were often ponderous and lyrical. After Ezra took a red pen to T.S.Eliot, James Joyce, Robert Frost and Ernest Hemingway’s manuscripts, the accepted writerly language was more concise, succinct and mimicked the cadences of the spoken word.

In short, he was the Marie Kondo of literature!

 

We’re still following Ezra’s writing rules today – perhaps even more so. I believe everyone (and every brand) has a personal writing style lurking within them. Finding that unique voice is as much to do with what you take out (or edit) as what you leave in.

So, here is one professional writers editing tips to perfect your own writing style, a la Ezra:

  • Think about your audience

    The best writing speaks directly to its audience, using their language to convey meaning. If you imagine your audience before you put pen to paper (or fingers to keys), it can help nail your message every time.

  • Choose your words carefully

    Excessively long sentences can put your reader off before your message even begins. Before sending your words out into the world, read through your work aloud. Cut any words that fail to contribute to the message you want to convey. Common overused words you can often take a red pen to include:

    Just
    Very
    That
    It seems
    In my opinion
    I think
    Of the
    To.

  • Be brief

    Today's attention spans are short. Long-winded prose can throw them off course. Nobody wants to work that hard. Try keeping sentences to a maximum 15- 25 words. Break down your ideas. Shorter phrases captivate your reader’s attention (see what I did there?). Similarly, paragraphs should comprise one or two sentences only – especially if you're writing for business. Large text blocks only encourage readers to skim. A great way to check if you’re over-writing your sentences is to use Hemingway – an online tool dedicated to slashing the meaningless phrases from your work. Just like Ezra Pound did for the actual Hemingway.

  • Find your voice as a writer

    There are two kinds of writing voices: active or passive. My tip? Go for active every time. It's stronger, surer and more direct. It keeps them message you want to get across simple, and that's more likely to remain embedded in your reader's mind. Ezra Pound loved it. Consider his injunctions - "Make it new!" "Keep it clear!" They're so effective because they're simpler to understand and remember.

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  • Formatting matters

    Your writing’s format is defined by the white spaces in between paragraphs. Fiction writers use this white space to give their readers time to breathe and think about what they’ve read.

    When writing for business, white space works to break up your message into digestible chunks for readers who have little time to spare and want information fast. Generate more white space and allow the reader’s eye to move freely down the page by breaking up your text with:

    Bullet points
    Sub-headings
    Bold text
    Numbered lists
    Grammar

  • Be grammar wise

    Correct grammar and spelling are vital to great writing. Grammar justifies the structure and form of your sentences (morphology) and how you arrange your words in a sentence (syntax). It allows others to understand your ideas more easily.

    On the other hand, don’t get too caught up in grammatical correctness. The great Modernist writers famously played with the rules because – hey – once you’ve mastered grammar, tone of voice and style, you’re free to mix it up a little. As Pound exhorted: "A genius has a right to any mode of expression."

    Consider one of the most iconic paragraphs in all of Modernist Literature from James Joyce’s “Ulysses.” Don’t try this at home unless you’re a bona fide master!

half open at night and the castanets and the night we missed the boat at Algeciras the watchman going about serene with his lamp and O that awful deepdown torrent O and the sea the sea crimson sometimes like fire and the glorious sunsets and the figtrees in the Alameda gardens yes and all the queer little streets and the pink and blue and yellow houses and the rosegardens and the jessamine and geraniums and cactuses and Gibraltar as a girl where I was a Flower of the mountain yes when I put the rose in my hair like the Andalusian girls used or shall I wear a red yes and how he kissed me under the Moorish wall and I thought well as well him as another and then I asked him with my eyes to ask again yes and then he asked me would I yes to say yes my mountain flower and first I put my arms around him yes and drew him down to me so he could feel my breasts all perfume yes and his heart was going like mad and yes I said yes I will Yes.

— James Joyce
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  • Writers play with the rules

    As you can see from the above excerpt, punctuation, especially commas, can change a sentence’s meaning.

    Removing all commas, like Joyce has, allows the reader to determine their own meaning from the text. I think this excerpt is a perfect example of Ezra's description of great writing: "Man (sic.) reading should be intensely alive. The book should be a ball of light in one's hand."

  • Aim for the stars

    Pound's editorial role for the Modernist greats definitely helped them achieve this goal. Joyce, Eliot, Conrad, Woolf, Beckett, Kafka and Stein are nothing if not incendiary. Their work blazed a trail across Literature that still burns today.

    There's no doubt words can make a serious impact. Learn from the greats and your writing can blaze brightly in your customer's minds, too.

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